(Jon’s teacher Tami questioned him about the last sentence in this story—it seems like a non-sequitur—but Jon insisted it stay in because it was important. And from Jon’s view, it IS important: Paul and Judy’s house actually had a bathroom on the main floor, so bathroom runs were much easier than usual for him!

From the teacher’s note following the story: “I find it interesting that he wrote the whole story in present and future tense (except last line) as if while remembering it, he was right back in the moment! I didn’t bother to correct him this time!” —L)

I love going to go luging on Saturday. On Saturday I like to go into the hot tub. I love going to go into the hot tub to get warm. I’m about to go luging on Sunday. I’m about to visit Uncle Pall. I’m about to luge with Uncle Pall. I went to the bath room.

Jonathan