I meet the bears. The bears are going to the house. The bears are going to read a book. The bears are going to go outside to go for a walk in the rain. They are going to go outside to play in the playground. They are going to slide down the slide.

Jon

[From Jon’s teacher: Jon wrote this without supervision, with only reminders that sentences start with a capital. Three times he wrote a sentence, then was not happy with it, so he’d erase it and write a different one. Sentences I thought were in the story would disappear to be replaced by better ones!]